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September 8, 2010
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Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 400D DIGITAL
Shutter Speed
1/400 second
Aperture
F/5.0
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
400
Date Taken
Aug 18, 2010, 5:47:21 PM
Software
Adobe Photoshop CS3 Windows
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I like this photo, and the bokeh is very interesting. It really creates a fascinating background.

The colours are so soft and easy on the eyes. The background is perfect.

However, the model's eyes aren't very sharp, it looks as if you focused on his hair... or on his clothes. It's a pity, because it could've been a wonderful photo.

I believe it's the exposure, though. Perhaps it is a little underexposed. I've had a look at the camera settings details and I noticed that the aperture could've been wider. Considering the focal length of 50mm, I assume the lens you used is the "nifty-fifty" -- the so well-known 50mm 1.8. In this case, only using a lower f-number would have given you better results.

If I am wrong, then perhaps you could've increased the shutter speed. Or you could have edited the curves in Photoshop, if none of these would've been possible.

The framing is good, the composition is also strong. I would've changed the colour of his shirt, that pink doesn't fit the overall tones, perhaps a warmer colour like red or orange would've done better.

But all in all, I like this photo, and I trust you'll do better next time. I tried to give you some piece of advice, because that's why people request critique. I hope I haven't been too harsh on you, though. I enjoyed looking through your gallery.
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kyouya2909 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011
Handsome!
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JasonPhotoStudio Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2011  Professional Photographer
Nicely captured! Beautiful! More of this subject would brighten all days! :)
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Nastasie Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2011
thank you!
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icyhugs Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow.... are you an angel? :heart: :heart: :heart:
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Nastasie Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010
me not, but he may be :)
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neokamatari Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
You have a very delicate and attractive look ^_^
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Nastasie Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010
thank you
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